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dark_kana ([personal profile] dark_kana) wrote in [community profile] rainbowfic2012-10-29 06:46 pm

Cotton Candy 6 - Angel Cake 6 - Alice Blue 21 - Pointillism - Miniature Collection - Seed beads

Name: Kana
Title: Swinging back and forth
Story: Shadows in the distance
Characters: Sarah
Colors: Cotton Candy 6 Swingset – Angel Cake 6 In the service of – Alice Blue 21 Today isn’t any other day, you know
Supplies and Styles: Pointillism – Miniature Collection – Seed beads
Word count: 142
Rating: PG
Notes: Constructive criticism is, as always, welcome



Sarah looks at her daughter – laughing cheerfully while swaying back and forth – concerned, because she knows what’s still to come and knows that it will come soon.


It is only when the swingset starts moving all by itself – while the leaves and the branches of the trees stay motionless – that Sarah knows, really knows, her little girl has inherited Simon’s gifts.


Sarah sets herself on the swingset next to her daughter – just watching her, staying silent, offering silent comfort – knowing Caithlynn is worried about the future, her future.


It’s a lonely sight, now Caithlynn is gone, the garden with the swingset no one will use again – until, perhaps, after the war, when they have won and peace has returned.


Gently Sarah swings back and forth, tired eyes watching the distance, waiting – for the world to end or her daughter to come home.
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[personal profile] bookblather 2012-10-30 03:35 am (UTC)(link)
I like the use of the swingset. Nice framing device.
kay_brooke: A forest corridor in autumn, the path carpeted with leaves (autumn)

[personal profile] kay_brooke 2012-10-30 02:38 pm (UTC)(link)
Poor Sarah. I hope Caithlynn does come home to her someday.
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[personal profile] lhune 2012-11-01 10:47 am (UTC)(link)
I truly see swings differently now, I liked how you've used it.