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dark_kana ([personal profile] dark_kana) wrote in [community profile] rainbowfic2012-10-27 03:17 pm

cherry blossom pink 17 - true blue 7 - bichromatic - photography - miniature

Name: Kana
Title: Poetry
Story: Circle never ends
Characters: Freya
Colors: cherry blossom pink 17 Tanka – true blue 7 fast friend
Supplies and Styles: Photography – bichromatic - miniature
Word count: 84
Rating: PG
Summary: Right after Token of Friendship (https://rainbowfic.dreamwidth.org/358012.html)
Notes: Constructive criticism is, as always, welcome



At night in the woods
Fireflies in circled flight
My best friend and I


She looks at the haiku she just wrote and smiles. She’s tired but the words were suddenly there. Stirred by the moment in the woods just an hour ago. And she’s not one to deny inspiration when it hits her.


Not ready yet to confess
I feel lots more than friendship.


Shaking her head, Freya puts the piece of paper safely away. She’ll never let him read the last lines.
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[personal profile] bookblather 2012-10-30 02:45 am (UTC)(link)
Oh, pretty! I like the poem, and I hope Nick sees it someday.
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[personal profile] lhune 2012-11-01 11:09 am (UTC)(link)
I'd love to have Nick discover this Haiku...
Perhaps at a moment he's confused/uncertain about Freya's actions?