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dark_kana ([personal profile] dark_kana) wrote in [community profile] rainbowfic2012-10-22 06:24 pm

Harvest Gold 14 - Peach 8 - PbN - Eraser - Miniature - Feathes - Glitter

Name: Kana
Title: Goodbye
Story: Memories once stolen
Characters: Rafael, Nelly
Colors: Harvest Gold 14 South for the Winter - Peach 8 No-handedly
Supplies and Styles: Paint by Numbers (from Subluxate: Like taking candy from a very cranky baby) - Eraser – Miniature – Feathers (Your character is gone) – Glitter (“Love takes off masks that we fear we cannot live without and know we cannot live within." – James A. Baldwin)
Word count: 83
Rating: PG
Summary: Rafael leaves.
Notes: Constructive criticism is, as always, welcome


“Rafael!”

She screams while running after the car. Tears streaming down her face. She can’t stop them.

Out of the back window, she sees Rafael’s face. Tears on his cheeks. The look on his face shows her he’s as heartbroken as she is.

“Don’t go! Please! Don’t go! Don’t leave me! RAFAEL!!”

Her father comes after her, taking her in his arms. Nelly kicks and screams. Not wanting the car to disappear in the distance.

“Let me go…”

Her screams turn to sobs.
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[personal profile] bookblather 2012-10-24 06:54 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, man, I remember that intensity of teenage feeling. I hope it eases a bit.
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[personal profile] lhune 2012-11-01 11:32 am (UTC)(link)
Poor Nelly and Rafael *squishes them both*