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Ilthit ([personal profile] ilthit) wrote in [community profile] rainbowfic2023-11-06 01:12 pm

Psychedelic Purple #12: My lover is asleep on my arm (Lin Moniao Series)

Name: My lover is asleep on my arm
Story
: The Lin Moniao Series
Colors: Psychedelic Purple #12 (you are part of everything)
Supplies and Styles: frame, gesso; fingerpainting, miniature, photography, silhouette
Word Count: 79
Rating: general
Warnings: The poet is emulating an untranslatable style in a language they don't speak.
Summary: Ten lines of poetry by Mu Liqiang, about Lin Moniao.

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The hallways are quiet.
No light shines through the paper.
My heart already whispers, it will be morning soon.
It leaps like a dog eager to be let out of the pen;
I tell it to be quiet and to be patient.

My lover is asleep on my arm.
The day will wait, and the day after, too.
My heart barks: There is much to do.
Much to touch and say, and see;
and I miss my lover's smile.
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[personal profile] thisbluespirit 2023-11-07 08:42 pm (UTC)(link)
The poet is emulating an untranslatable style in a language they don't speak.

I could tell even without reading this line, and it's very effective! I like it.
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[personal profile] bookblather 2023-12-06 04:32 am (UTC)(link)
Another very clever one! I like it very much.